Allegheny, Monongahela

Batykefer, Erinn. Allegheny, Monongahela. Los Angeles, CA: Red Hen Press, 2009.
Erinn Batykefer’s Allegheny, Monongahela may be her first collection of poetry, but it displays a mastery of form and content that underscores the awards and publications listed in the book’s acknowledgements. “Dog Poem” begins the collection with an image of what it means to be a poet: “I’ve been known to drag old bones with me for miles./If I bury them, the only question is how long/ till I’m clawing the ground to feel them under my teeth again.” From there Batykefer launches into explorations of death, love, and identity. While the collection features some more open poetry, Batykefer’s talents shine brightest when working in the formal modes. The sonnets “Red Hills with White Cloud,” “Pittsburgh as Self-Portrait I & II,” and “Haute Couture” demonstrate that the poet is comfortable working within the strictures of the form but also feeling the freedom to stretch the edges of the form to meet the poetic needs of the material. “Allegheny Love Letter” teems with earthy anthropomorphic imagery that sketches not only the many moods of the mighty river but also provides a chilling profile of the kind of love that cannot help but destroy the beloved. The most successful of the free verse works dwells on an extended anatomical metaphor to describe the speaker’s experience with opera—“The palate lifts like a curtain; the skull a dome for resonance.” This is not the only poem to dwell on what is going on under the skin of the body. “X-Ray” describes the portrait produced by the medical device, while “Horizontal Horse’s or Mule’s Skull with Feather” evisions a future “When my face is scoured clean, sun-whitened, / when my vulgar skin has been stripped / from my body.” “Egyptology” outlines the mummification process “because grief requires compartmentalization.” Lest you think that Batyfefer’s collection is nothing but dark tropes, “Heirloom Recipe” provides a touching—not sentimental—tribute to the power of a peach cake to remind us of our history. While Allegheny, Monongahela does have its weak spots, the delights far outweigh them.
Stephen March, Strangers in the Land of Egypt

March, Stephen. Strangers in the Land of Egypt. Sag Harbor, NY: The Permament Press, 2009. Available May, 2009.
There’s much to like in Stephen March’s Strangers in the Land of Egypt. The protagonist is that likable high-schooler who somehow is much more self-aware and wise than his peers but who still has lots to learn. The crises in the story don’t stretch our credulity. And the epiphanies in the end are profound, but they don’t promise to solve everything in a neat little package.
What keeps me from loving this book is that it doesn’t seem to know who its audience is, whether it’s aiming for a traditional Young Adult crowd or a literary adult audience. It’s the difference between Cecil Castellucci’s Beige or Sara Zarr’s Story of a Girl and Robert Clark’s Love Among the Ruins, between a coming of age story in which the narrator is developing along with story and one in which an adult narrator—with adult understanding—looks back on youth. Where this comes out most strongly to me is in the exposition. After passages of deep understanding probing the emotions and psyche of our main character, we’ll get expositions of the basics of Judaism or the Holocaust that might be fitting in an After School Special. Castellucci’s Katy learns things she doesn’t know in natural interactions with her environment; Jesse listens to the kind of lectures I’d like to give the teens in my life but know they’ll never hear.
Blurbs pasted on the back of my reviewer’s copy praising March’s previous work claim that “March has successfully captured the feel of Southern angst as only…Faulkner or Flannery O’Connor can.” I generally ignore blurbs, and its probably unfair to compare anyone living to the crown royalty of Southern fiction. I can certainly see how an overzealous blurber could make the connection. Does Strangers feature an agnostic protagonist being confronted with a moment of supernatural grace? Yes. Does the story take place in a small town where everyone knows everyone, and everyone has a colorful backstory? Yes. But for my money, this town could have been placed in any of a number of struggling Northern towns. Maybe the hegemony of consumerism has erased some of the unique qualities that made the South of Faulkner and O’Connor distinct from the Hawthorne’s New England or Sandberg’s Chicago.
I began this review saying there’s much to like in Strangers in the Land of Egypt. What made me keep turning the pages was the developing relationship between a self-aware, clueless boy and an odd Jewish Holocaust survivor. That Jesse (as in “the tree of”) is redeemed by the ministrations of a man named Ebban, the helpful stone carved with holy text, perhaps puts too fine a point on the transformation of the teen, but it is perhaps the only heavy-handed aspect to a subtle conversion in which we don’t see a fully renewed soul but rather a man set on the path of grace.
The Live and Loves of Mr. Jiveass N*****

Brown, Cecil. The Life and Loves of Mr. Jiveass Nigger. 1969. Berkeley, CA: Frog Books, 2008.
“All the publishers are interested in selling books and if you say something about sex and being a nigger then you got a bestseller” (206).
C.S. Lewis writes that fiction allows you to be a thousand men whilst always maintaining the integrity of your own person. In today’s impoverished lingo, he argued that fiction allows us to walk in another person’s shoes. To be honest, the world of Brown’s classic novel of an African-American navigating the gigolo world of Copenhagen is one I didn’t want to stay in for very long. The rawness of the sexual encounters that make up much of the book at first seemed to be little more than the kind of meaningless encounters strung together by thin plot lines that are the hallmark of run-of-the-mill porno. I found myself repeatedly referring back to the insightful, new introduction by Henry Louis Gates, Jr. to reassure myself that something worthwhile was going to come of this odyssey through the sordidness of late-60’s Denmark.
However, as the novel progresses, the increasing bizarreness of the protagonist George Washington’s encounters with women wear on him as much as on the reader. Upon entering the bedroom of his last encounter, he sits on the sofa, head in hands, wondering “What is beauty, Mrs. Hamilton?” When Washington realizes that “everybody in this town, every black person, seems to be living off someone or something else. Everything but their insides” (203), he decides to go back home to the U.S., back to where “the battleground is a bit more familiar” (206). (more…)
The Book of the Unknown by Jonathan Keats

Keats, Jonathan. The Book of the Unknown: Tales of the Thirty-Six. Random House, 2009. $13.00
When one reads “modern-day fairy tales for grown-ups, reimagined from Jewish folklore” on the back of a book, one is prepared for ironic tales in which that which we see the good side of the bad. We’ve been prepared for these ironic fairy tales from the spate of post-modern spate of books that tell us that what we’ve been shown thus far isn’t the whole story. What I wasn’t prepared for in Jonathan Keats’s The Book of the Unknown: Tales of the Thirty-Six was the storyteller pushing through the idea that irony is good for its own sake to show us the truths that irony reveals in its opposition.
Tet the Idler, who lives in a world without sleep, not only discovers the value of rest, but in doing so, he also rediscovers the joy of work. Dalet the Thief, whose thieving becomes toothless when the traditional items he steals lose their worth in a booming and developing economy, returns the town to their humanity by stealing those baubles by which the neuveau riche now measure their worth. And so it goes in each of the 12 tales.
The tales are framed with a mysterious tale of a student collecting these stories of secret Jewish saints. Sounding almost Buffy-like, we’re told that in every generation there are 36 saints roaming the earth. The catch is that the saints don’t know it. The narrator suggests that it is in the “quotidian” that we find holiness rather than in the special. The tales themselves suggest that not only is holiness found in the quotidian but also that it is found in those who do not seek it. None of the protaganists know that they are saints nor are they much interested in seeking out spiritual truth. Each blithely goes about their lives simply trying to live. It is as they try to make sense of thier lives that their search reveals to their communities the truths they didn’t know they sought.
Performing this sort of ironic morality instruction would be engaging in a single story, but Keats pulls off a thoroughly wondrous set of 12 tales, each one rendered in a natural voice that while echoing the patness of a fairytale never condescends to either the material nor the reader. While the inclusion of only 12 tales in a book whose subtitle is “Tales of the Thirty-Six” may smack of marketers setting up a sequel, it’s a sequel I would gladly welcome.
Time Bandit: Two Brothers, The Bering Sea, and One of the World’s Deadliest Jobs

Hillstrand, Andy, Jonathan Hillstrand, and Malcolm MacPherson. Time Bandit: Two Brothers, The Bering Sea, and One of the World’s Deadliest Jobs. New York: Ballantine, 2008. $25.
I have an image in my head of Malcolm MacPherson sitting at a table surrounded by piles of audio-cassettes and notebooks, head in hands as he tries to figure out what in the world to do with the hours of anecdotes, stories, histories, and process explanations that he has just collected in conversations with the Hillstrand brothers. That MacPherson was able to find a central narrative on which to hang all of these baubles is not as impressive as his ability to maintain a lively voice for each of the brothers.
Not having cable, I haven’t had the pleasure of watching the Discovery Channel’s show Deadliest Catch. After reading Time Bandit, I’m not sure that I need to. MacPherson uses the narrative of Jonathan’s rescue from being adrift alone during a salmon fishing run to organize the biography of these life-long fishermen as well as a brief lesson in the history and mechanics of crab fishing in the Bering Sea off the coast of Alaska. While the stories are told with first-person immediacy, the book doesn’t lose the narrative drive like the disappointing Jorgy. While some chapters may go on a bit, the overall rhythm of switching from Jonathan’s narrative to the related tales and obeservations is generally effective. The suspense of Jonathan’s situation carrying you over the wave ahead.
The “as told to” approach of Time Bandit robs it of the literary quality of the fisherman/authors collected in Leslie Leyland Field’s anthology Out on the Deep Blue: True Stories of Daring, Persistence, and Survival from the Nation’s Most Dangerous Profession or the memoirs of Linda Greenlaw, but Time Bandit is not simply two old salts telling war stories. Throughout the volume, both Hillstrands reflect often on the nature of humanity that would put themselves through such danger and also on what drives them personally to continue in an industry that will most likely kill them. Their ruminations go beyond hyper-masculine chest thumping to the questioning of human motivation.
At one point describing themselves as dinosaurs, the Hillstrands represent a unique brand of fisherman that was raised with the old, practically unregulated, system and is now transitioning to an era of fishing that is much more controlled by the government. The Hillstrands admit and illustrate the necessity and even effectiveness of the new regulations, but they also fear that the heart of the industry is being eroded by the encroachment of bean-counters and bureaucrats. Time Bandit may then stand as a salt crusted monument to the frontier long after it has been rationalized into the ground.
The Enchantress of Florence
Rushdie, Salman. The Enchantress of Florence. New York: Random House, 2008.
“Wherever goodness lay, it did not lie in ritual, unthinking obeisance before a deity but rather, perhaps, in the slow clumsy, error-strewn working out of an individual or collective path.”
Strangers wearing long leather coats. Mughal kings reigning over an exotic court. Imaginary idealized women coming to life. The glory and intrigue of Renaissance Italy. Boyhood friends coming together for one last crusade. Pirates. Long lost uncles. Dark hints at the origins and demises of figures still casting shadows on contemporary politics. Inquiries into the nature of the self and the divine. Sensuality and sex.
Salman Rushdie’s newest novel, The Enchantress of Florence, certainly has it all. While Ground Beneath Her Feet recast an ancient story in contemporary time, The Enchantress of Florence keeps the setting firmly set in the past while weaving a new story in spaces left vacant by history.
In the 12th century, Genghis Khan united the tribes of northeast Asia and swept over most the continent. In the late 14th century, the Mongol Timur the Lame himself conquered much of central and western Asia. Generations later, claiming descent from both military leaders, we enter the court of Abul-Fath Jalaluddin Muhammad, known as Akbar the Great. With seemingly little else to do, we meet Akbar worrying about what happens to his identity when talking about himself in the third person. It’s serious discussion he has with himself, but a failure in referring to himself as “I” has ramifications far beyond the immediate uncomfortableness he feels.
The main plotline follows the fortune of a European stranger entering the court with a story to tell. His immediate history is suspect, and it is only his storytelling abilities (and the olfactory wizardry of an unlikely prostitute) that keep him from certain doom. Calling himself the Mughal of Love, the stranger claims a blood relation to Akbar. On the one hand, such a blood relation could solve the problem of Akbar having to pass his kingdom on to unworthy sons. On the other hand, the stranger’s story of proof opens many doors of hidden family history that are both unproovable and inconvenient.
It is the stranger’s story that makes up the second major thread of the narrative. Like Scheherazade, the stranger’s tale is told to save his life, for, having claimed kinship to Akbar, his life would be forfeit should he be unable to proove his claim. And also like Scheherazade, the stranger’s tale weaves together real history, fantastic adventure, and glorious romance. The tale concerns three friends of Florence, one of them the famous Machiavelli. One friend travels the world and becomes a fearsome warlord. One friend climbs the political ropes of power. One friend travels nowhere and lives a simple life until his last great adventure.
Rushdie’s brand of magical realism has the odd quality of simultaneously engaging you in a narrative you think should be interesting and distancing you from that very narrative. Told like a fairy tale, the tone constantly reminds you that you are reading, and that reading is an artificiality. However, ever mindful of the artifice, the reader then constantly wonders, what purpose then did the maker have in mind? Thus, along the way of this intertwined story, we begin to pay close attention to the asides discussing the way of kings, the place of lying, the role of religion, the truth of power. Like the religious pilgrim, it’s no good mindlessly entering the temple and going through the motions. You, dear reader, must work out the value of journey.
Jorgy: A LibraryThing Early Review

Lester, Jean. Jorgy: The Life of Native Alaskan Bush Pilot and Airline Captain Holger “Jorgy” Jorgensen._ Ester, AK: Ester Republic Press, 2007. $25
In the late 60’s my grandfather purchased an 8mm film camera complete with light bar. It was a hand-wound model that would only capture a minute or two of action before needing to be rewound. The movies he captured from that era featured select highlights: children crawling on the ground, adults gesticulating towards children to get them to crawl, birthday cakes being extinguished. The special moments were carefully selected and shaped. Watching them now is entertaining and effectively allows us to expand our memories.
In the 80’s my grandfather acquired a videotape camcorder. The inexpensive recording medium and lack of any processing time or fees meant that we could record every moment of every family event. And we did. A tripod was set up in the dining room so that whole family dinners could be recorded in their entirety; each and every Christmas present was unwrapped for the camera in slow succession. Watching these tapes now is an exercise in endurance. The lack of any selection or shapliness to the events reveals the banality of the majority of our conversation. Comments and remembrances that had us laughing till we cried or fondly remembering other family events are buried in the lengthy stretches of passing carrots and explaining mundane daily business. The documentarian of the past, sifting through the sands of the creek to find nuggets of gold, was replaced by an undiscerning strip mine.
Such is the effect of Jorgy: The Life of Native American Bush Pilot and Airline Captain Holger “Jorgy” Jorgensen. The book reads as though Jean Lester, the “as told to” author, merely transcribed hours of interview tapes with Jorgy Jorgensen. Events are repeated, fascinating side-stories are introduced and abandoned without care, rabbit-trails are followed at whim, and even seemingly unrelated political ramblings are included with little context or thoughtful development.
The shame of it is that the life of Jorgy Jorgensen appears to have been an interesting and important one. Here is a man who spent his early years subsisting in a mining village on the Alaskan frontier. After just an 8th-grade education, he stepped into the early years of Alaska aviation, helping to build important airstrips and learning to fly. Jorgensen had a front seat in watching the development of the Alaska oil and air industries. Had Lester collated the interviews and given them some kind of narrative shape, even as little as ironing out the temporal wrinkles that often appear when we tell stories about our lives, the events of Jorgensen’s life could have presented a compelling narrative of the history of aviation, Alaska, and the life of native peoples in the frozen wastes. As it stands, the considerable power and romance of the story is lost.
I still find myself wanting to go back and watch the old 8mm films my grandfather made, but I cannot remember a single fleeting desire to sit through a recorded family dinner. For dogged researchers interested in the facts of the area and period, the book will stand as a solid record of one man’s experience of Alaskan aviation. However, a solid record does not make a compelling biography.